I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ceezyn, I like the design of your T Shirt, especially how one colour fades into the next. I was wondering if you chose the baby picture because it reminded you of your baby brother and your two baby cousins?
wow Ceezyn its me Hesioni your T Shirt is amazing. i liked how you add games and little animals and it looks really nice. it is nice i do not think you need to change anything about it. it's already perfect.
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ReplyDeleteHi Ceezyn, I like the design of your T Shirt, especially how one colour fades into the next. I was wondering if you chose the baby picture because it reminded you of your baby brother and your two baby cousins?
ReplyDeletewow Ceezyn its me Hesioni your T Shirt is amazing. i liked how you add games and little animals and it looks really nice. it is nice i do not think you need to change anything about it. it's already perfect.
ReplyDeletekia ora ceezyn i like what you did on your T Shirt and what i liked the most is
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